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Yes, it works very well as a Cliffhanger chapter end.

NOW POST THE REST OF IT! :twisted:
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Well well... Reeves was a priest?
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Yes; cleric of Valkur. It's often hard to tell with them. :wink:
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My god, you posted again. Not bad, hon... not bad at all
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HOLY SHIT! It's a TROLLSBANE!

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I figure this is where he becomes TrollsBane
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You'd like to think that, wouldn't you? :grin:
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God, I'm glad I posted that chapter. My recent virus troubles appear to have wiped out my recent writings.
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That had been languishing on my hard drive since 2010 while I tried to edit it down. I really couldn't, though, and the thing in the chapter that inspired the chapter title I'd chosen was so far back in that it would have been ridiculously long. I was reading through the story again today and it hit me that I should just cut the damned thing in half and name the first half something else; I don't know why that didn't occur to me before. So without further ado, chapter ten.
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About damned time, Rogue. Now, where's Chapter 11?
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Here. Much delayed - too much delayed - but as ordered, Your Ladyship.
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"A fortress circumvented ceases to be an obstacle.
A fortress destroyed ceases to be a threat.
Do not forget the difference."

"Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed." -- G. K. Chesterton
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