I woiuld appreciate any feed back on this
Thanks
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She Broke My Heart I Wanna Be Sedated
All I Wanted Was To See Her Naked
All I Wanted Was To See Her Naked
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Very few typos, which is always good.
I'll wait for a bit more before I comment storyline wise.
I'll wait for a bit more before I comment storyline wise.
Never shall innocent blood be shed, yet the blood of the wicked shall flow like a river.
The three shall spread their blackened wings and be the vengeful striking hammer of god.
The three shall spread their blackened wings and be the vengeful striking hammer of god.