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Mayabird · Post by **Mayabird** » Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:30 pm

Here's the thing: Amy Chan isn't me and doesn't have access to outside sources in her situation. I don't think she was ever very interested in pre-modern warfare and only has a vague idea about a lot of things ("The Swiss had really long pikes, right? Twenty feet, or eighteen feet, or something crazy like that, I think. I really should have paid more attention to that guest speaker.")

Not that I'm not interested, just in case I find myself in some parallel medieval universe, but now I know how Bill Watterson felt when he wrote comics about Calvin being ignorant about something and getting piles of letters about whatever it was.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:26 pm

If only Amy Chan knew frigidmagi right?

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Mon Nov 03, 2008 12:30 am

Good stuff Maya!

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Wed Nov 12, 2008 1:46 pm

The Emperor while scary is definitely in the camp of the kill the messenger. This means if I ever want to tell him bad news... I should send someone else.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:10 pm

The Tahalshias keep a low profile.

However, I'm betting money the "80s super" that ran around WV was MoonKnight, because for a while he was living/supering in WV in the 80s. I had several of his books

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Sun Feb 22, 2009 3:12 pm

AHAHAHAHAHA! That's funny as hell Maya.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:21 pm

Once again Maya brings the funny! I'm giving it 4 stars, -1 star for short length.

Be neat to see more PSA.

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Wait does this mean our girl is working offically for the Atlanta City Government?

Mayabird · Post by **Mayabird** » Fri Sep 11, 2009 6:59 pm

frigidmagi wrote:Once again Maya brings the funny! I'm giving it 4 stars, -1 star for short length.

Be neat to see more PSA.

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Wait does this mean our girl is working offically for the Atlanta City Government?

Glad you liked it.

I have a first draft of a second PSA in the works now. Granted, considering how long it takes me to update things, can't promise it'll be done soon.

I figured this PSA is out-of-universe the way most cartoon ones are, unless you think G.I. Joe actually went around popping up in people's houses the moment the kids accidentally set the drapes on fire. Maybe. ...Let's say it's probably not canon.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:03 pm

I rather like it, CT. But then again, I'm a big Dresden fan.

rhoenix · Post by **rhoenix** » Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:32 am

So far, so good CT. Your writing is improving, so each paragraph isn't as..."dense" as before.

I've never watched the Dresden Files, but the idea of magic & the like in modern day is a fun one. Keep it up.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Jan 23, 2010 3:15 pm

While it was on TV, the novels themselves are better.

Comrade Tortoise · Post by **Comrade Tortoise** » Sat Jan 23, 2010 8:33 pm

LadyTevar wrote:While it was on TV, the novels themselves are better.

millions of times better

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:12 pm

Once again, a great story. With Dresden so indebted to Winter, I find it nice to see more of the Summer Court creatures.

There is one section of the fight that wasn't quite clear to me:

Instead he clamped down on the rock-face and rebounded off it snaking a head the size of an office chair against the pain.

What's happening?

Comrade Tortoise · Post by **Comrade Tortoise** » Sun Jan 31, 2010 9:54 pm

fixed it

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Feb 01, 2010 4:09 pm

Oh damn... that was a great chapter. Now, we just have to get Mendez

rhoenix · Post by **rhoenix** » Fri Feb 05, 2010 2:44 am

Not bad man, that was some well-deserved come-uppance.

The question remains, though..."Now what?"

Comrade Tortoise · Post by **Comrade Tortoise** » Fri Feb 05, 2010 4:17 pm

Windswept wrote:Not bad man, that was some well-deserved come-uppance.

The question remains, though..."Now what?"

There are going to be a number of explosions, the mortal authorities may or may not be drawn in...

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:01 pm

I like.

Comrade Tortoise · Post by **Comrade Tortoise** » Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:31 pm

LadyTevar wrote:I like.

Oh, and Mendez is small fry compared to what happens later.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:29 am

Don't Tell Ben, Show.

Comrade Tortoise · Post by **Comrade Tortoise** » Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:48 am

frigidmagi wrote:Don't Tell Ben, Show.

Oh, and I will.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:59 am

Nice to see Amy Chan back. So... She does realize that if you go on vacation, you're begging for vacation hijinks and troubles right?

Also, doing a big of stealing from Spiderman?

Good choice!

Mayabird · Post by **Mayabird** » Wed Jun 30, 2010 9:51 am

Why thank you!

I think Amy Chan is too mentally and emotionally exhausted to care right now.

Steve · Post by **Steve** » Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:52 pm

frigidmagi wrote:Nice to see Amy Chan back. So... She does realize that if you go on vacation, you're begging for vacation hijinks and troubles right?

Poor Amy Chan is still trying to get the hang of this business I think.

Also, doing a big of stealing from Spiderman? Good choice!

I don't remember if Klavo inquired as to getting an insert or if I (or Amy, don't remember which of us first brought up the prospect of "Klavo the Hunter") found his SN too perfect to pass up as a character to use.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Sun Jul 11, 2010 2:32 pm

[quote]â€œWe are the Freegan Five!â€

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