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SirNitram · Post by **SirNitram** » Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:25 pm

Read and comment, puny mortals! My first venture into writing 40k. I hope I got a good feel down.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:35 pm

My god Nitram.... That was intense!

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:05 pm

Pretty good.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Fri Jun 09, 2006 11:39 am

I enjoyed it.

Post by **Dark Silver** » Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:09 pm

RE: The Only Witness

Interesting...I rather like it.

Comrade Tortoise · Post by **Comrade Tortoise** » Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:15 pm

I am really liking this.

And am I the only one who figured out what this guy is?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:32 pm

Only Witness:

POST MORE OFTEN GODDAMMIT!!!!

and yes, CT, I think we all know who/what Charl is. But I'm to "not give it away" *eyes the husband over her shoulder*

Comrade Tortoise · Post by **Comrade Tortoise** » Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:37 pm

Just making sure.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:27 pm

*dies laughing* I love his reaction to going home with her ... and then to the 'inn'.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 6:56 pm

Daaammmmnnnnn.... That was brutal Nit. So the Coke thing was to throw the cops off guard and make the Pally look crazy?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:49 pm

It looked like it worked, too. DAMN, that was a nasty trick on our little Paly.

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » Sun Aug 27, 2006 12:57 am

...

Smite via unarmed strike?

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Sun Sep 03, 2006 3:43 am

The cops got fooled by flour? Crap on a stick.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Sep 03, 2006 8:32 am

Great job, m'love!

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Sep 10, 2006 7:23 pm

Fantastic Job!! That was just perfect!

Now, you just have to finish it

Comrade Tortoise · Post by **Comrade Tortoise** » Sun Sep 10, 2006 7:51 pm

excellent

You know what this really needs? Charl Matrixing with Divine Grace through a hail of bullets.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Mon Sep 11, 2006 12:12 am

Arthur? Was that fucking King Arthur?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Sep 11, 2006 5:54 am

[singsong] I know who it ii-ss I know who it ii-ss
I aint a'tellin' I ain't a-tellin![/singsong]

But it aint no King.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Feb 17, 2007 8:19 am

My love, you do not write nearly often enough.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Thu Mar 01, 2007 8:06 pm

Repentent Iron Warriors?!?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Mar 01, 2007 9:44 pm

frigidmagi wrote:Repentent Iron Warriors?!?

Mwhahahahahahahahahaha

Although he does need to clean it up a little... the Guardsmen mentioned are NOT with the Inquistitor.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Oct 11, 2007 11:35 pm

Once again, m'love. You don't post often, but when you do it's fantastic.

rhoenix · Post by **rhoenix** » Fri Oct 12, 2007 1:55 am

Excellent work, Nitram - and not just because I've a soft spot for the Exalted universe.

It flowed well, the characterizations evoked the imagination well. Good work.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Fri Oct 12, 2007 9:12 am

That was interesting although I honestly don't know much about exalted. I kinda saw the Gravtius part coming.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Oct 12, 2007 9:18 am

Is't it just like Gravitas to have a universe to contemplate so he lets everything else fall away?

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