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Pure Sabacc · Post by **Pure Sabacc** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 12:58 am

I suppose this is the way it's done...

Right now, I only have one fic posted here, but depending upon schedules and such, I might post more. Until then, you can find some of my work on Stardestroyer.net (as Noble Ire) or FF.net (as Pure Sabacc).

Echoes: A star Wars Short

Respond, if you wish.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 11:59 am

Ooo... I like! You need to post more of your writing!

The Grim Squeaker · Post by **The Grim Squeaker** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 4:20 pm

I saw you on FF.net, why don't you re-post "The Rift" over here so that it can be spread out more?

Scottish Ninja · Post by **Scottish Ninja** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 5:36 pm

"The Rift" is one of my favorites. More people do need to read it, I think.

Pure Sabacc · Post by **Pure Sabacc** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 7:26 pm

The Grim Squeaker wrote:I saw you on FF.net, why don't you re-post "The Rift" over here so that it can be spread out more?

I'll probably do end up doing that. I started to once, but when I looked over the first few chapters, I decided to do a bit of revising, and the repost was sort of forgotten. I'll put it up when I have some time to do the transfer.

And thanks, everyone.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:22 pm

My dear, I demand more of this new story.

The characters are fascinating, the backstory crying out for more information, and you left the heros in a bad situation.

Thus, you need to write more chapters. Soon.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Oct 06, 2006 6:35 am

From adventure to political manuevering... very interesting. I did think there was a bit too much descriptiveness, however.

It does make me wonder what the events of the first story have to do with the events of the second.

Pure Sabacc · Post by **Pure Sabacc** » Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:02 pm

From adventure to political manuevering... very interesting. I did think there was a bit too much descriptiveness, however.

Yes, I thought so too. As is, I had to cut out a good deal of background from the text and hold it in reserve for another chapter, and I'm not sure how to balance it out any more without taking away too much detail.

Hopefully the next few parts will move a bit more smoothly, even though there is still a considerable amount of exposition I still have to get through.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 4:46 pm

A great new story! I do hope you're going to write more and explain what that tiny system has to do with the Empire.

Pure Sabacc · Post by **Pure Sabacc** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 10:51 pm

LadyTevar wrote:A great new story! I do hope you're going to write more and explain what that tiny system has to do with the Empire.

There's certainly more on the way; Embers is intended to be around fifty pages long, so there are at least half a dozen updates coming.

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