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Once again, my friend, you have taken a chaotic fight scene and made it believable. Fantastic job.
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Yes superb.

Now if only Astinius would rain down fire and destruction upon the banites...
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Comrade Tortoise wrote:
Now if only Astinius would rain down fire and destruction upon the banites...
Then quit picking defensive abilities like counter spelling and whining about how you need a meat shield. :razz:
It's not that I'm unforgiving, it's that most of the people who wrong me are unrepentant assholes.
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Cynical Cat wrote:
Comrade Tortoise wrote:
Now if only Astinius would rain down fire and destruction upon the banites...
Then quit picking defensive abilities like counter spelling and whining about how you need a meat shield. :razz:
hell, Kaeryn's a better fighter than you are!
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LadyTevar wrote:
Cynical Cat wrote:
Comrade Tortoise wrote:
Now if only Astinius would rain down fire and destruction upon the banites...
Then quit picking defensive abilities like counter spelling and whining about how you need a meat shield. :razz:
hell, Kaeryn's a better fighter than you are!
Yeah, well Gaheris is a better fighter than the lot of you, so shut up and get behind me. :razz:
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Cynical Cat wrote:
Comrade Tortoise wrote:
Now if only Astinius would rain down fire and destruction upon the banites...
Then quit picking defensive abilities like counter spelling and whining about how you need a meat shield. :razz:

You said it, not me. (of course, you see where the lack of a meat shield got Nalifan...) Also, he is specialized as a Mage Killer, and nothing confounds a mage better than not being able to land that one offensive spell he needs, before being P4WNED :razz:
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Rogue 9 wrote:
LadyTevar wrote:
Cynical Cat wrote: Then quit picking defensive abilities like counter spelling and whining about how you need a meat shield. :razz:
hell, Kaeryn's a better fighter than you are!
Yeah, well Gaheris is a better fighter than the lot of you, so shut up and get behind me. :razz:
If you insist. The view is quite nice back here...
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Re: Shadow War

Another great action scene. It's nice to see a hero think before they act.

Re: Trizk

It take a real man to walk away from something like that, in hopes of a brighter future.
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LadyTevar wrote:
Rogue 9 wrote:
LadyTevar wrote: hell, Kaeryn's a better fighter than you are!
Yeah, well Gaheris is a better fighter than the lot of you, so shut up and get behind me. :razz:
If you insist. The view is quite nice back here...
Heh heh. :twisted: And at 20 Charisma, it oughta be.
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Wow.........keep it coming if you still got it.



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Merged, by me. All Feedback goes to the feedback threads.
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*snickers* Does Nalifan need a hug? :lol:
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LadyTevar wrote:*snickers* Does Nalifan need a hug? :lol:
Even if he did, he would never admit to it. :grin:
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LadyTevar wrote:*snickers* Does Nalifan need a hug? :lol:
Even if he did, he would never admit to it. :grin:
Then Kaeryn should go comfort him :twisted:
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You nailed his eating habits. :lol: Granted, not hard to guess with his background, but still well done.

And I'll tell you what's going to dominate his fantasies for a while yet. "Razhal Ironfist, meet Bright Edge. Bright Edge, Razhal's spleen."

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lagons of wine, bear, and chilled water were brought forth
I corrected that for you... somehow I don't think you can drink Bear :lol:

Hopefully either Imaziel or Kaeryn will try to talk to Nal about this. Kaeryn herself would be torn, since she joined in to help Nalifan
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Oh great. Is she going to bail on us too?
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I doubt it, she may love Nalifan, but she is also a Dweomerkeeper and bound by her clericness to carry out the best interests of the church of mystra. And stopping banites is certainly in those best interests.
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Thats' why I said I was torn.
She also promised to help Nal find out who killed him
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What is it with that Drow and his bloody murder ballads? :razz:
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Narsil wrote:What is it with that Drow and his bloody murder ballads? :razz:
And how often do you find yourself humming your favorite song, hmm? :-D

When I'm bloddy-mided, I'm humming/singing things like "Never Again", "Unforgiven", and "March of the Cambreadth"

Nothing like a song that has verses like "How many of them can we make die!"
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LadyTevar wrote:And how often do you find yourself humming your favorite song, hmm?
I often don't. I whistle Twisted Nerve sometimes, however. But that's mostly after watching Kill Bill too many times.
When I'm bloddy-mided, I'm humming/singing things like "Never Again", "Unforgiven", and "March of the Cambreadth"

Nothing like a song that has verses like "How many of them can we make die!"
Heh, I'll have to find those... and listen to them (naturally) :razz:
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"Never Again" -- NickleBack
"Unforgiven" -- Metallica
"March of the Cambreadth" -- Pheonyx (PM/IM me and I'll send it to you)
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Nice. Very nice.
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Comrade Tortoise wrote:Nice. Very nice.
But is it true? :twisted:
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