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Rebecca and Adam: The rather uncreatively titled bit I have up is a work in progress, a piece inspired by many a sci-fi program.

Man is dying. Man puts mind into computer before biting it. Loyal lab assistant cares for the mind.

This is approached a little more from the assistant's point of view. The parts that look like they're copy-pasted from a chat window are supposed to look that way, as that is the case. Main groupings of italics are from Adam's point of view.
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I love it.
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