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#1 Author Feedback: Pure Sabacc
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 12:58 am
by Pure Sabacc
I suppose this is the way it's done...
Right now, I only have one fic posted here, but depending upon schedules and such, I might post more. Until then, you can find some of my work on Stardestroyer.net (as Noble Ire) or FF.net (as Pure Sabacc).
Echoes: A star Wars Short
Respond, if you wish.
#2
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 11:59 am
by LadyTevar
Ooo... I like! You need to post more of your writing!
#3
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 4:20 pm
by The Grim Squeaker
I saw you on FF.net, why don't you re-post "The Rift" over here so that it can be spread out more?
#4
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 5:36 pm
by Scottish Ninja
"The Rift" is one of my favorites. More people do need to read it, I think.
#5
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 7:26 pm
by Pure Sabacc
The Grim Squeaker wrote:I saw you on FF.net, why don't you re-post "The Rift" over here so that it can be spread out more?
I'll probably do end up doing that. I started to once, but when I looked over the first few chapters, I decided to do a bit of revising, and the repost was sort of forgotten. I'll put it up when I have some time to do the transfer.
And thanks, everyone.
#6
Posted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:22 pm
by LadyTevar
My dear, I demand more of this new story.
The characters are fascinating, the backstory crying out for more information, and you left the heros in a bad situation.
Thus, you need to write more chapters. Soon.
#7
Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 6:35 am
by LadyTevar
From adventure to political manuevering... very interesting. I did think there was a bit too much descriptiveness, however.
It does make me wonder what the events of the first story have to do with the events of the second.
#8
Posted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:02 pm
by Pure Sabacc
From adventure to political manuevering... very interesting. I did think there was a bit too much descriptiveness, however.
Yes, I thought so too. As is, I had to cut out a good deal of background from the text and hold it in reserve for another chapter, and I'm not sure how to balance it out any more without taking away too much detail.
Hopefully the next few parts will move a bit more smoothly, even though there is still a considerable amount of exposition I still have to get through.
#9
Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 4:46 pm
by LadyTevar
A great new story! I do hope you're going to write more and explain what that tiny system has to do with the Empire.
#10
Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 10:51 pm
by Pure Sabacc
LadyTevar wrote:A great new story! I do hope you're going to write more and explain what that tiny system has to do with the Empire.
There's certainly more on the way;
Embers is intended to be around fifty pages long, so there are at least half a dozen updates coming.