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LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Apr 23, 2007 5:34 am

Awww... what a wonderful gift to wake up to, a New Whirlwind.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Apr 24, 2007 5:33 am

"You are superior in only one respect," said Dalek Thrass. "You are better at dying."

YES! *dances* I knew you wouldn't resist using that line!

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Apr 29, 2007 9:34 pm

Brilliant! I had forgotten that was the one the Shapeshifter took over!

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue May 01, 2007 5:55 am

Another great chapter, but with a glaring typo :sad:

"The race called its 'Daleks'.

I'm assuming that should be "itself"

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed May 02, 2007 5:38 am

Let me guess... this is where Blackheart learns he can fly? *snickers*

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu May 03, 2007 6:00 am

BRILLIANT! Spread the cost of the spell amongst thousands of sorcerors ... why did no one think of this before?

Post by **Dark Silver** » Thu May 03, 2007 8:20 am

They did.

They do it often in Mage The Ascension, joint rituals.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri May 04, 2007 5:40 am

They fail to their predictability and slow scientific progress as a strength.

This sentence doesn't make sense to me :sad:

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon May 07, 2007 2:34 pm

Have a decontamination teach standing by for our arrival

Is this the right word?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue May 08, 2007 5:46 am

Since you wrote this really early in the morning, and your sleep schedule's screwy, all the typos are understandable.

When you've had some sleep and can take a look at it again, I'm sure you'll see the typos, and you may even be able to clean up some of the chunkier sentences and clear up who's getting beaten up by whom at a couple points.

Otherwise, it was a great ending to that particular mission

Nasty way for Slipstream to go, tho.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Wed May 09, 2007 10:42 am

Great... Blackheart's the incubator for Chthulu.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu May 10, 2007 8:39 pm

Nalifan, oh Nalifan, you arrogant, arrogant mage. *dies laughing* How in the world did Kaeryn hear that slightly drunken rambling and not break down laughing?

Rebirth, on the other hand... Shame Shame, don't you know never wear rings on your weapon hand?

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Thu May 10, 2007 10:20 pm

LadyTevar wrote:

Rebirth, on the other hand... Shame Shame, don't you know never wear rings on your weapon hand?

That's why they are on his off hand. And since each one also packs the punch of a tac nuke . . . .

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri May 11, 2007 5:43 am

Cynical Cat wrote:
LadyTevar wrote:

Rebirth, on the other hand... Shame Shame, don't you know never wear rings on your weapon hand?
That's why they are on his off hand. And since each one also packs the punch of a tac nuke . . . .

Heh. He still took up a weapon in it

I see Gix is about to face down another nasty demonic thingie.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue May 22, 2007 5:49 am

Sylvetria drew her sword and approached. "Enough Nal."

"Enough?" said the drow. "How do you think they punish the peasants? How much pain and suffering do you think his servants dish out daily?"

"More than this," Sylvetria said and decapitated Zyush in one sure stroke. "He gets a clean death because to do otherwise would be to lessen me. Understand?"

The drow shrugged. "As you wish."

Yeah... SHE can tell him that, but when Kaeryn tries it she gets a lecture

BTW: Typo

my to needle

I think you mean 'me'.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Tue May 22, 2007 7:16 am

LadyTevar wrote: The drow shrugged. "As you wish."

Yeah... SHE can tell him that, but when Kaeryn tries it she gets a lecture

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Because she doesn't do the same things as Kaeryn. She's giving a quick death to someone Nal doesn't really care about and doesn't need information from. A tiny sacrifice on Nal's part to give that up. A hated enemy would be different.

She'll also side with Nal when he wrecks a city to kill his enemies and we all know Kaeryn's thoughts on that.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue May 22, 2007 11:02 am

Cynical Cat wrote:She'll also side with Nal when he wrecks a city to kill his enemies and we all know Kaeryn's thoughts on that.

.................
Ok, you got me there. Syl's more neutral/practical when it comes to that kinda thing than Kaeryn... which may explain why Syl's a fighter, and Kaeryn's a cleric.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Tue May 22, 2007 12:37 pm

LadyTevar wrote:
Cynical Cat wrote:She'll also side with Nal when he wrecks a city to kill his enemies and we all know Kaeryn's thoughts on that.
.................
Ok, you got me there. Syl's more neutral/practical when it comes to that kinda thing than Kaeryn... which may explain why Syl's a fighter, and Kaeryn's a cleric.

She's also a Vaasan. She grew up under the shadow of the war against the Witch-King in a harsh land where war and blood feud are common.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue May 22, 2007 2:08 pm

Cynical Cat wrote:She's also a Vaasan. She grew up under the shadow of the war against the Witch-King in a harsh land where war and blood feud are common.

*Sigh* This is what Kaeryn gets for being 'civilized'

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » Thu May 24, 2007 1:01 am

The plural is molydei. And the 16th level party in one of my campaigns wiped the floor with one a few days ago, so unless this one's special I don't see much hope for him.

Oh, and the power to make balors quake comes more from that axe and the DR-bypassing stuff they have; they beat other demons because they're specialized for it. None of our protagonists are demons, so...

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Thu May 24, 2007 2:09 am

Rogue 9 wrote:
Oh, and the power to make balors quake comes more from that axe and the DR-bypassing stuff they have; they beat other demons because they're specialized for it. None of our protagonists are demons, so...

Of course the SR, quickened spell like abilities, soul trapping, super verulent poison, monsterously quick fast healing, the fact that axe in question is also vorpal, massive hit points, and so on make it a pansy

Molydei are death machines that happen to be better than most at killing fiends. They're pretty unspeakable against almost any foe.

And as the chief enforcer of a demon lord and creature originally tasked to slaughter illithid psi masters it has a shit load of levels in Mortal Hunter (BoVD).

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu May 24, 2007 5:32 am

In short, this particular moldieguy is going to be one of the best challenges Nal & Co have faced on this little planet.

Post by **Dark Silver** » Mon May 28, 2007 1:23 am

You changed the title of Blackheart's story......for a second there I thought you had a new one and wrote out 19 frigging pages of it in a day....

Bad Cynical....no fresh tuna for you....

oh ok...the new chapter was worth from fresh tuna...

and ear scritches

definatly worth ear scritches....

-scritches Cynical behind the ear-

Dreadnaught is good...I like him.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon May 28, 2007 4:30 pm

I see you've been talking a lot to B4 about the backstory.

Unfortunately, it gives me insight into why certain African countries have started being swallowed whole. Africa would make a very nice New Eden.

The Cleric · Post by **The Cleric** » Mon May 28, 2007 9:43 pm

Holy crap CC would you just concentrate on 1 fic and finish it

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