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LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:26 pm

He lies, and he dies.

Is that an honor thing, or what? He was dying either way

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Fri Mar 05, 2010 11:50 am

LadyTevar wrote:He lies, and he dies.

Is that an honor thing, or what? He was dying either way

It's a "don't fuck with the Scarlet Spires thing." He might have recovered.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Mar 16, 2010 7:50 pm

I love it when you do Film noir. this is fantastic.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Thu May 06, 2010 8:10 pm

I do have to wonder what Nalifan said to the Queen alone in her chamber. Mean of you to leave us with those cryptic words.

I'm glad he's back, even if the chapter is so short.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Thu May 06, 2010 9:24 pm

Be interesting to see what Nal does. Conventionally speaking the sheer number of enemy spellcasters means magically speaking he's on the defensive. But this is Nal, he thinks the best defense is ripping out your enemies eyes and chopping off their hands... Which I gotta admit is a pretty good defense.

Me? I would open up with something aimed at killing or weakening their horses.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sat May 08, 2010 2:23 pm

frigidmagi wrote:Me? I would open up with something aimed at killing or weakening their horses.

Very nasty little suggestion there. You'd need something that couldn't be 'easily cured' via Neutralize Poison or Remove Curse. Although adding a nice little fast-growing naturally toxic weed into the grazing lands would be a good start. Especially if it's a northern weed the southerners have never experienced. Milkweed, for example?

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Sat May 08, 2010 2:25 pm

frigidmagi wrote: Me? I would open up with something aimed at killing or weakening their horses.

Actually, he's already started and it will kill more than just their horses.

Muhahahahaha!

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Sun May 09, 2010 12:15 am

Very nasty little suggestion there. You'd need something that couldn't be 'easily cured' via Neutralize Poison or Remove Curse

Simple enough. Don't curse the horses. Curse the flies that bite the horses. Make the water bad to drink, just add salt. Twist the grass, don't make it poisonous, make it addictive and hallucinogenic. Ever seen a horse go through withdrawal?

Yar Cat, I know you're doing something else but I hope these met with your approval anyways.

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Sun May 09, 2010 12:38 am

frigidmagi wrote: Yar Cat, I know you're doing something else but I hope these met with your approval anyways.

Oh my magi, of course it did. Nalifan's most definitely going to kill the horses. It's just not going to be limited to the horses.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon May 10, 2010 6:53 pm

Cynical Cat wrote:
frigidmagi wrote: Yar Cat, I know you're doing something else but I hope these met with your approval anyways.
Oh my magi, of course it did. Nalifan's most definitely going to kill the horses. It's just not going to be limited to the horses.

well, Nal does live by the "There is no Overkill, only I need to reload"

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Fri Jun 18, 2010 4:00 am

And it's good to see Nal's enemies are pulling their own plans together.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:13 am

And the fight begins. would be nice if they could have knocked down that earth wall, just in time to flood the crossing tribesmen.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:56 pm

How did the rangers know where to be?

Cynical Cat · Post by **Cynical Cat** » Mon Jun 21, 2010 7:22 pm

"Of course, sending a half dozen of their heavy hitters and a gaggle of witches and horsemen up the river to dam it has certain consequences. One of which is that sneaking around in the pre-dawn darkness is not a good way to hide your movements when the other side has elves in their numbers. Another is that even if they survive the ambush they won't be available to deal with the surprise I have for them."

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Tue Jun 22, 2010 6:11 pm

There were a lot of typos in the Gix chapter, hon. Too many for me to list

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Jul 23, 2010 4:52 pm

SQUEEEEE! More Nalifan, and the battle begins.

Now to see what other nasty tricks Nalifan's got hidden besides DeathWing.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:53 pm

There is one thing I know... IT'S A TRAP!

The question is whose trap is the nastiest?

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Jul 23, 2010 6:08 pm

frigidmagi wrote:There is one thing I know... IT'S A TRAP!

The question is whose trap is the nastiest?

Demonic Gnolls v/s Ancient Wyrm DracoLich.

I'll take the Dracolich for $500, Alex.

frigidmagi · Post by **frigidmagi** » Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:21 pm

Yeah, huh Tev? I'm willing to bet that's not the whole card game. Both sides have at least one more card to play and it's a question of which side has the nastiest hole card.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:05 pm

When it comes to hiding nasty ace cards, my bet is again on Nalifan.

However, the devil with the Prince is a wildcard.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:02 pm

I had to go back and reread the whole story, it had been that long. Glad you've not forgotten!

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:26 pm

One: YAY!!! MORE BLACKHEART!!!

Two: Fuckin' hell I want to see that damned sniper dead.

lade5 · Post by **lade5** » Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:18 pm

Cynical Cat

Please update soon !! absolutely loving your more realistic take on metahuman conflict in your series.

Cheers
Lade

We have a Comments Subfolder just for this kind of praise, so the main thread doesn't get cluttered. Let me move you there.

LadyTevar · Post by **LadyTevar** » Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:54 pm

Wow, Cyncat. Here I thought he was being cast out as a traitor.

Great job building the suspense.

Rogue 9 · Post by **Rogue 9** » Thu Apr 07, 2011 7:30 pm

LadyTevar wrote:Wow, Cyncat. Here I thought he was being cast out as a traitor. Great job building the suspense.

No, were that the case they'd just shoot him.

At any rate:

Cynical Cat wrote:Sheathed at the Chapter Master's hip was the power sword Terminus Est, from which the Chapter derived it's name.

the power sword Terminus Est

Terminus Est

HERESY! *BLAM!*

Typhus aside, excellently written as usual.

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