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by dragonfolder
Fri Jan 07, 2011 3:54 am
Forum: User-Fiction Reviews
Topic: Feedback for Rhoenix/Windswept
Replies: 71
Views: 25871

Eleboration on the "Ichigo-ness".

Hi again rhoenix, My point when writing that Alex became more like a typical "Ichigo" lies in that at first Alex's personality is quite clear, and I see that his actions bring both good and bad things (e.g. he bonds with a souledge, but looses his girlfriend). As the story progresses I feel I loose ...
by dragonfolder
Thu Jan 06, 2011 3:25 pm
Forum: User-Fiction Reviews
Topic: Feedback for Rhoenix/Windswept
Replies: 71
Views: 25871

General review of chap. 1-4. :)

Hi, I'll stick to the format you wished ^^: 1. I liked the concept of how the growth of a total outsider will play out in Soul Society. The fact that Alex has flaws is good (makes him easier to realte to), problem is, as the chapters progress he becomes more like the typical Ichigo-hero. Don't get m...
by dragonfolder
Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:32 pm
Forum: Fantasy & Comics
Topic: Building an enormous robot to guard your border...
Replies: 16
Views: 4697

I've to say thank you fgalkin for your insightful replies :grin: .

I'll get back to you when I've fleshed out the setting a bit more and worked out what sort of threats there are if that's ok with you.

Have nice day you too.
by dragonfolder
Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:15 pm
Forum: Fantasy & Comics
Topic: Building an enormous robot to guard your border...
Replies: 16
Views: 4697

My bad ^^, I'll try to rewind. 1) The border is big: A sircle rougly the size of Europe. The robots are spaced as evenly as they can be on the outer border in order to stabilize reality. Due to outside threats few if any live close to the outer border, hence the image of a lone watchfull robot. 2) N...
by dragonfolder
Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:05 pm
Forum: Fantasy & Comics
Topic: Building an enormous robot to guard your border...
Replies: 16
Views: 4697

well, part of the reason the have to be able to move is because as they function as the border, their creators want to have an expanding border with low upkeep. Use lots of reasouces to build one of these things and you have a safe border which you can slowly expand. I've got this image of miles and...
by dragonfolder
Wed Dec 16, 2009 2:39 pm
Forum: Fantasy & Comics
Topic: Building an enormous robot to guard your border...
Replies: 16
Views: 4697

Building an enormous robot to guard your border...

Hi all, I got this idea: What if the world was a place with shifting borders e.g. reality is warped outside the "stable" zones, and a race (whatever they be) used enormous robots/golems as borderposts - both to safeguard and to function as reality-stabilizers. (Got some of the inspiration from the D...
by dragonfolder
Wed Dec 16, 2009 2:29 pm
Forum: Great Hall
Topic: New User Introductions Mk II
Replies: 349
Views: 117181

Thank you, love your stories Cynical Cat - I've just read the 40k one from fantasyflightgames, but it's a gorgous piece :grin: Made me feel like reading dune again.
by dragonfolder
Wed Dec 16, 2009 1:46 pm
Forum: Great Hall
Topic: New User Introductions Mk II
Replies: 349
Views: 117181

First time user aboard :)

Hi, I'm dragonfolder (due to me folding origami ^^) - I joined because I'm interested in a smaller board where I can indulge in random sci-fi stuff :grin: - I'm a machine engineer student in Norway and I love stuff like Star Wars, 40k and MtG. First time I'm joining such a board so hopefully I'm doi...